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Don't syphon the hyphen

Hi,

It seems newspaper editors aren't immune from one of the most common errors I see from my corporate writing-training students.

This was on the front page of Sydney's Daily Telegraph recently:

Can you see the problem? It's confusing, because it's unclear whether it's saying two things, "New risk" and "Free pill", or one thing, "New risk-free pill".

That tiny hyphen makes all the difference.

It's called a "compound" adjective, because the two words must be combined to get the intended meaning.

Here's another example, from our "Get it Write" professional writing masterclass:

  1. small business advisor
  2. small-business advisor

In 1, the business advisor could be a dwarf. But with the hyphen in 2, it now means the person is an advisor to small business.

So watch your hyphens; they can really change your meaning and confuse your readers.

And whatever you do, don't use a hyphen (-) when you really mean to use a dash (—). Here's an easy explanation of the difference between hyphens and dashes.

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BRAIN GYM: Keep hyphens in mind next time you write — especially when using double adjectives (e.g. "small business advisor"). Also, use Word's "search" function to find hyphens (-) in your last document. Did you use them correctly, or should you have used dashes (—)?

 

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